In Continuation to Aayat's story, read what happens next. I am sure you will get some answers, and be left with many more questions ;) Enjoy!
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Aayat’s
head was still throbbing in pain. Her heart was thumping, as if trying to break
free from the safe confinements of her ribs. She tried to open her eyes, but
they were heavy. So heavy. Aayat breathed slowly and heavily, taking in all
that had happened. She remembered the split second thought of who it could have
been, after which the darkness followed.
With
all the energy she could muster, Aayat vexed to sit up, only to get hit on the
head and fall back on the ground. The pain was way too much now and brought her
to tears. She opened her eyes and it was still dark. Blurry and Pitch dark. She
had hit the “supposed” ceiling, which she thought was a tad too low for a room
or bunker.
Aayat
was getting anxious now. She was sure this wasn’t a dream. The pain was so real.
She was moving her head, straining her eyes to figure out where she was lying.
She could feel the nakedness of earth under her skin and hear a dog bark, at some
place far off. So she was not dead or dreaming.
“Where
am i?” she mumbled under her breath.
Aayat
spread her palm on the ground below to feel where she was. It was all mud,
stones and the smell of dust and soil. Confused now, Aayat’s mind started
racing. “May be I have been kidnapped. And this is some kind of a container or
vessel that I am being carried in” she first thought. So she waited. Waited for
the rhythmic to and fro of being carried. Trying to make sense of the direction
in which she was being carried, if at all!
But
there was only pin drop silence. No sound of the engine running. No movement,
what-so-ever. She kicked on the sides to see how solid the walls were. She
continued kicking with her legs in every direction possible, pushing whatever
of the walls that she could.
She
didn’t know why she was kicking. She didn’t know whether the door (if there was
any) would just break open. Or if the walls would subside. Or someone would
come to her rescue. She didn’t know what to expect. But she knew this was not
right, and that simply praying was not going to help.
With
the gravel all over her skin, she soon realized that she was underground.
Probably buried. Buried alive.
This thought scared the shit out of her! Aayat
recollected that she had heard a dog bark. Even though it seemed like a sound
from far away. She did. So she started screaming for help, hoping that someone would
hear and help her out.
The
more she screamed, the more she was running out of oxygen down there. She had
started to get breathless. The more her own voice echoed back in her ears, the
more restless, anxious and furious she became. “Is somebody there? Please help!”
she kept reciting.
Suddenly
she felt something cross her leg. Aayat screamed in horror, for she had no idea
how dangerous an insect/ creature it was. Besides it was dark, and there was no
way she could see “it”. Throwing her
feet in the little space that there was, Aayat could still feel “it” on her
ankle!
So
she craned herself and tried to reach her ankle with her left hand. The minute
she touched her ankle, Aayat’s heart stopped (figuratively, obviously). Instead
of feeling her skin and the “thing” that was crawling, her fingers touch a
piece of cloth. “What’s this” she thought.
Aayat
pulled the end of cloth and felt the elastic around her waist move. As if being
buring underground was not enough of a suspense already, here she was with her
clothes changed too? Why?
“Wait.
Why… am I not in my skirt? Why am I wearing pants???!” said a baffled Aayat. Tears
brimming again, fear now had a new meaning. Aayat could no longer feel the “thing”
bite her on the ankle. It didn’t matter. Not anymore.
Why
was she buried alive? Why were her clothes changed? She wanted answers. But
being 10, 12 or how many ever feet under the ground was not going to get her
answers! She had to get out fast. The clock had already started ticking. And
she didn’t know how much time she had.
*-* oh my god!! That's a lot of suspemce..
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ReplyDeleteYou know Gurpreet, sometimes the start and end of the story is so "thrilling", that whatever you write in-between doesn't justify/ satisfy the middle part of the story. That's the case with me here. I have tried many plots, none seem to excite me enough! Sorry to keep you hanging mid air with a story half written ! :(
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